'After seemingly busting the case and avenging his family' Rewrite and remove the 'busting' part Done 'On the other hand' Rewrite or remove Done 'He also has a very dark sense of humor.' This needs to either be removed or rewritten Done it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. 'he exhibits a strong desire to live, despite his inner monologue which describes his dark and utterly somber view of the world and his desire to be dead.' He has a strong desire to live, despite his desire to be dead? Doesn't make much sense, rewrite Not doneġb. 'morbidly cyncical' What does that mean? Not done Never mind I removed the whole sentence. 'as once again people close to him die.' Rewrite so this makes sense, please give it some context as to what 'people close to him die' really means Not done In video games appearances section appears to be the plot of all the games and the comic books together, could you make it clearer? Done In video games appearances section starts off with comic books? Done 'makes his situation a paradox' How so? Done 'Max loses his meaning of life' Rewrite this please to remove the meaning of life part ((not done the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience spelling and grammar are correct.

Max payne vs punisher